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Darkness Delves Deeper by ~Reod:iconReod:



What are you but my reflection?
A shadow of my former self
Trudging on into the ridged night of my mind
Further, deeper down into the chasm of my conciseness

To where the monsters of my past lurk
And into the endless unforgiving insanity, that is my mind

But coming along you’ve entered the fortress walls
Pushing back into
My life again
Leaving me breathless

Enter the madness
Don’t fall away
I need you now
Need you now

What is it you want?
Where is it we will go?
How will we hide from all else?
And when we get there where will we stay?

Down deep into my mind we delve
Into the darkness with no light
Entering into the forbidden places
Where its dog eat dog
And death at 10 paces

Where nothing grows and no light shows
Where the dogs of war howl at the blood red moon
And the hounds of eternity scratch at my mind
What then shall we do?

What then?
©2006-2009 ~Reod
:iconreod:

Author's Comments

Wow i dont mean to stroke my own ego, but i didnt know i could write this well.
Ok so ill subject myself to stroking my ego...... oooh that feels good. ...... yeah, Right there.... oh ... oh ...... YES!!!!!!!!!!

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:iconflamepoet78:
Love this hon. You have a talent with words. Thank you for setting me up with this site, it's like a match made in heaven. I don't think I've enjoyed looking at others works this much in a long time. Remind me to have you listen to Joey by Concrete Blonde the next time you are over. I think you would like it a lot. Been loving it for years, your poem reminded me of it, to the point where I am currently listening to it.

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Searching for inspiration from daily life.
Always willing to give new things a try.
~written-from-within
Renee
:iconreod:
Thank you for your kind words and i hope you like it here as much as i have.
If you want some other good Poetry go check out She has great stuff.
I dont have alot of other poets.

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Listen to the Mars volta
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Fool me once shame on me, Fool me twice.. we should team up :fuzzydemon:
:iconflamepoet78:
Thanks for the referal to a fellow poet. I am having a blast and looking forward to more of your work. Hope you enjoyed Ms. Jazzy Lynne, she seems to be no worse for the wear. Actually I haven't seen her sleep so well at night in a long time. So thank you to both of you over there, I needed the break. Lots of love.

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Searching for inspiration from daily life.
Always willing to give new things a try.
~written-from-within
Renee
:iconxxx-bloodflowers-xxx:
This is bloody BRILLIANT.
Fantastic.
Wow.

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"...and I woke up with a man inside my mouth!"
Robbie WHAT are you talking about? *suss*...
:iconreod:
wow, what an awsome comment *feels the cold prickly's wander off for a bit*
Thank you
*floats off to check out your gallery*

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Listen to the Mars volta
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Fool me once shame on me, Fool me twice.. we should team up :fuzzydemon:
:iconxxx-bloodflowers-xxx:
HeHe YAY =D
Not many peoples look's at my gallery.
=)
But seriously this poem is A-W-E-S-O-M-E.

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"...and I woke up with a man inside my mouth!"
Robbie WHAT are you talking about? *suss*...

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