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I enter my flesh
I find there is not much left
Of my holy body
In this world

Ground down to bare bones
And thick blood
I journey through the pain
The grinding, driving me insane

Sanity fleeting quickly
Through the holes in my skin
Fingers scrape at air
As the teeth, pull me in
©2006-2009 ~Reod
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a new poem
gritty and dirty

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Can't put my finger on why, but i like the last bit...

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"Allez-y, regardez-moi avec vos doigts, doucement, avec la paume de votre main."
--La nuit sacrée, Tahar Ben Jelloun
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So do I, I dont know why either, it just flows and sounds better than the rest
thanks for the comment

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Listen to the Mars volta
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Fool me once shame on me, Fool me twice.. we should team up :fuzzydemon:

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